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distance keeps us apart physically
but i always thought that didnt matter
the mental connection we have is close enough to a miracle

you never understood how much it is that i love you
how much i think of you every day
oh wait i tell you constantly
why couldnt you ever realize i was being serious?

theres so much i thought we could do together
i always thought highschool would end and i could spend so much time with you
that chance almost diminished
i would have died inside

without you, my life would be that much worse
you have brightened my days more times than i care to admit
maybe one day
you will realize
how much it is..
that i truely do love you
©2002-2010 ~keeb
:iconkeeb:

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shes meant everything to me for so long.. yet she lives so far away.

ash, i never want to lose you.

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:iconstupidperson:
i see you took out that line :) (Smile) has a great flow to it though.. and very emotional.. i'd like to hear what she says when you give it to her.
:iconleech:
thats really sweet keeb :) (Smile) youve improved sooo much, keep it up. And hang it there bud...
:iconkebz:
thats a really sweet poem keeb. its got a nice flow to it.. =) (Smile) nicely written indeed.

take care

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:invisible: kebz
:iconspottysalamander:
i think the way you wrote it, more full sentences than phrases, makes it more like prose. but it's still really good

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Love, Ceci
:icondemonical:
awww nick.. this made me cry when i first read it, and reading it again it still makes me teary. thank you so much. im so glad to know that you care.. im so thankful that you show it and let me know how retarded i am for not truley realizing it at times.

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patriotism has killed our brain cells and perverted negligence has injected us with a false sense of pride. you dont have to breathe american in order to belong.

*demonical
:iconkerenweezer:
:heartbreaker: .. Loooooove. Ouch,

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Bad girls understand that there is no point in being good and suffering in silence. What good has good ever done? We women still only make seventy-one cents, on average, for every man's dollar.

BITCH, by Elizabeth Wurtzel
:iconpinstripedtart:
blahahh...........

just a random expression of owee's, that one really hit me, since i could write in a similar manner....

great work, and... *sniffle*

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